Tuesday 6 March 2012

Planning an empathic response

Plan an empathic response to the following questions:
1)
You are John in The Yellow Wallpaper. Your lease on the house will expire in three weeks’ time and your wife has asked you to take her away.

Write your thoughts.

2)
You are Mala in The Third and Final Continent (by Jhumpa Lahiri). You have just arrived in Boston and your husband has taken you to your new home. Write your thoughts.


3)

You are Willadean in The Taste of Watermelon. You’ve just seen your father’s reaction to the theft of the prize melon.

Write your thoughts

4)
You are the mother in On Her Knees.You’ve just found the jewellery.

Write your thoughts.



Plan by listing events referred to and key quotations which you could build a paragraph around.

Example:-

1)      John’s response to his wife’s comments to a possible haunting – “an intense horror of superstition”. She mentions a strange feeling about the house and he closes the window, putting it down to a draught. Refuses to acknowledge she is ill in mind – wants to discourage her ‘nervous troubles.’ He claims there is no reason for them. She claims to see people walking in the garden and he says these ‘excited fancies’ need to be checked by exertion of her ‘will’. Implies she needs to pull herself together and get a grip on these wild fancies. P.39 he refers to the need for his wife to exert her ‘will and self control in order to repress silly fancies. P.40 he stops her mid sentence when she implies that her body improves but her mind grows worse. ‘A false and foolish fancy’

2)      Discussion with narrator’s brother about her symptoms and prescription required. John is convinced that his wife is getting better ‘you are gaining flesh and colour, your appetite is better.’ Promises her a trip away.

3)      Opposition to the act of writing – thinks it tires her out and focuses her on her condition. John’s sister thinks narrator’s writing has caused her illness (p.38).

4)      Talk of the wallpaper – she tells him of her imaginings about the wallpaper which at first he finds amusing and is willing to indulge her by changing the paper. However, he changes his mind because he believes she is letting her inexplicable fancies get the better of her and she needs to face them(p.36). Develop paragraph on her increasing obsession with it until he finds her touching the walls in the night on p.40 which is the point at which she asks to leave the house.

5)      Paragraph on why he doesn’t feel the need to leave – pleasant airy environment conducive to recovery, their own house is undergoing alterations and not yet ready for their return, he is very busy with work and commitments and often away, but his sister with them and looking after narrator in husband’s absence.

6)   Visit of Mother and Nellie and children. He thought exposure to society and stimulus of others would take her mind off own illness but seems to have tired her out more than anticipated. Increased pattern of crying and resting even more. Narrator really keen to visit cousins but not considered strong enough by John.

5 comments:

  1. Write about Willadeans perspective of her father’s rage at finding the melon gone.

    1. For this we should look at what we know about willadean and Mr wills;

    Mr wills
    • Very protective over his wife and willadean.
    • He is known as a great melon farmer
    • “He fights the fields to as if they would never provide sustenance”
    • He’s a big man, bright fierce eyes, he has a withering look
    • He does not share his crop
    • He Is going to grow this melon specially for his wife
    • He is described as having “rages”
    • They say “ we were all afraid of Mr wills”

    Willadean

    • We know relatively little about Willadean
    • She is 16
    • She is very pretty
    • Tall and slender
    • She looks after her ill mother

    2. So for this question we should use references’ from the text as a starting point:

    • “They’ve stolen my seed melon” he yells- this quote shows easily Mr. wills anger
    • “Mr. wills looked insane with anger”- again showing good background knowledge of this confrontation will be useful for answering the question.
    • “He went back to his task of destruction” this reiterates the fact that Mr. wills has been completely blinded by his rage and anger. This can be brought into willadeans feelings, as she will obviously be afraid about her father being in such a state.
    • “I looked towards the house. I saw the 2 women…standing their”- this is an incredibly useful quote as it shows that willadean has witnessed the whole confrontation as so will be able to recount images and phrases that have been said.

    3. Now using all these 2 pieces of observation to create a picture and an experience in willadeans mind is vital to the success of the answer. For example using quotes from the text in your answer and then expressing her personal feelings to what is being said will of course reflect well on you.

    4. Try to avoid making up and assuming things happened in the story without proof to back up your expericance. Making assumptions and creating events will if anything confuse you and the examiner. Try to stay

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  2. Holly Morrison


    • You are Mala in The Third and Final Continent (by Jhumpa Lahiri). You have just arrived in Boston and your husband has taken you to your new home. Write your thoughts.

    Narrator - The young character whose ambition led him to travel abroad. His struggles to adjust to his new home and new bride took him to attend many great learning institutions.

    Mala - A dutiful daughter, a dutiful wife. She doesn’t really break out of this mood, but becomes something more than she could have. She has been made to go and live in a different country with a man she doesn’t know at all.

    It was evident how much the dialogue changed between Mala and her husband. When they first married the conversation was cold and brief. As her husband changed, more dialogue developed between the two. They were able to engage each other more and have things to talk about. The first time that they looked at each other and smiled was when the narrator was talking to Mrs. Croft when the landlady noticed Mala. She asked him, and he told her that Mala was his wife. Mrs. Croft studied Mala, and then she proclaimed that Mala was a perfect lady.

    Felt uncomfortable – she always had to impress:
    He suggested going out. Mala stopped knitting and went into the bathroom. When she emerged he regretted the suggestion; she had put on a silk sari and extra bracelets, and coiled her hair with a flattering side part on top of her head. She was prepared as if she was going to go to a party.

    1. character analysis
    2. suitable quotes
    3. evaluate quotes
    4. summarize quotes and give overall analysis.

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    1. This is insightful, Holly, but it would vey much help you if you included some key quotations too. Always build from the text itself.

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  3. (1) Proud
    -has a ‘kind of stiff-necked working class pride’
    –‘she wouldn’t let [her son] get a part time job to pay [his] way’
    -‘cleaning was a come down from her previous job’ but she still thinks there [is] more honour in scrubbing other people’s floors than in having strangers scrub your own.
    -‘she never said a word’ about her son hating cleaning and the fact that she did it.
    -‘she was proud of her good name’

    -‘she wept under the lemon tree’ (when she got sacked for stealing a pair of earrings) ‘where she thought I wouldn’t hear’ so she doesn’t want her son to see how upset she was
    -‘We’ll clean that flat within an inch of its life’ even though she has been humiliated by these people she takes the high road and chooses to show how good she is rather than retaliating.
    ‘Don’t tell me. The principal, right? Talking about her using her own kit instead of the house owners-so believes in principals.
    -she lies to her son about what the envelope the house owners left her says showing she is maybe slightly embarrassed about how she is being treated.
    (2) Has values
    -‘she was discreet and deadly honest’
    -‘she left jobs, she did not lose them’
    -‘she stood in the doorway to lecture me on the subject of personal pride’
    -‘she looked troubled for a few moments’ about the subject of the stolen earring, shows she cares and shows her let out a bit of her worry that she tried to contain in front of her son, as if to protect him. It also says she talked to him in the shower ‘as though [he] was not a twenty-year old law student but a little boy who needed his neck scrubbed’ so shows she still sees him as a little boy that needs protecting-she is probably over protective because of her husband leaving them.
    (3) Hard Working
    -‘she earned a reputation’
    -when her son goes with her to clean the house she says ‘Oh, it’s not help, love. It’s company’ referring to why he is good to come with her
    -‘she was shining with sweat’

    (4) Is bitter about the earrings (AFTER they are found)
    -‘Five hundred dollars? She muttered. That’s rich’
    -‘She shook her head with a furious smile
    -‘that’s all I’ve got-my good name’
    -‘you can’t fight back’ shows she has kind of given up a bit?
    -‘I’m worth more’ talking about the money left for her, and she doesn’t take it. Shows she is still proud of herself after everything and still respects herself.

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